This week, I am rewriting my first chapter (again). The beginning scene is symbolic and will parallel the ending (and has a nice set-up for introducing my 'Star' MC), but doesn't give you the feel of the MC like chapter two's first scene. So, I am trying to both pump the MC voice into the first scene as it is, and I am writing an alternate draft, which opens the book with the scene from the second chapter. Hopefully when I am done, I will be able to get rid of my doubts, and decide once and for all what is best for the opening of the book. Otherwise, revisions are going well-- I am working on piecing together the third chapter.
Any thoughts? What goals does everyone have this week?